literature

Best Friends

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You used to always tell me how it felt
When there was nothing else that mattered
But being with that person
Who was just as fucked as you
And who said all the wrong things
And would out their anger
With a pen and speaker
And we would always laugh
That kind of nervous laugh and turn the volume
Up until our heart beats would race it
You would have a shouting match with Anthony Green
And those hair ties would finally break the skin
Well those days were forever ago
And Anthony Green's voice never sounds the same without yours
Even at shows my heart beat never gets that fast as it did those nights.
I'm begining to believe that there is no such thing as best friends.
Anthony Green and my best friend have the same screaming voice. Be jelous.
© 2005 - 2024 sunkendreams
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ice--eyes's avatar
First of all, some people have trouble taking poetry seriously when you throw in un-needed cuss words. I personally think it would be better without it.
Your message is unclear, is this person your best friend or not? Your word choice could use some work, better description and all that.
I don't know what else to say besides that... there's your critique!